This clip explains how to create a strong descriptive writing piece by engaging the senses through words. It explains that evoking emotion with clever use of diction is key to illustrating the book in the reader's mind. The clip provides concrete examples from real works to support its claims.
Tora Jane had planted herself in the favor of Karakoram aristocrats through lots of favors and heavy corruption. Those in the empire capital supported the secession of her son Guyuk however for him to become Great Khan all Khans must attend the Kurultai. Batu of the golden horde refused to attend claiming illness. This started the early steps of the fall of the mongols
Fred attends a group therapy session for some advice in dealing with his brother, Santa Claus. One of the participants is enraged by Fred's claim that Santa Claus is his brother, as he believes it is a joke, and the rest of the people in the session try to calm him down. Another member of the therapy session offers some brotherly advice which resonates with Fred.